All seven commandments made

By Old Major

Until he passed away

Suddenly sow begin

Editing

Each and every One of the commandments

For their enjoyment

Living by

All animals are equal, but some

aNimals are more equal than others

The barn Greeting the white paint when a

Unexpected change may happen so

All of the animals can have the

Gift of

seEing it for themselves

When Brandon Emanual Wellington read "Facing It" by Yusel Komunyakaa, I thought that he did very well. I thought he understood the poem and he used dramitization to make the reading of the poem more effective. He used it a lot through out the poem but it helped create a image in my mind when he was reciting it. He seemed confident when he was on stage and not nervous.

The poem had a very important meaning. The poem was about war, maybe a veteran, who's vistiting the vietnam memorial and he remembers what it was like being in the war. During the reading he did a good job of changing point of views by using dramitization.